Are you kidding? I think it's great! The shading is especially well-done. The only things that look strange to me are her bow and right hand...the bow looks a bit flat, I guess? I think it could use some creases or something, I dunno. And her right hand doesn't look as defined as her left (but I know how hard it is to draw hands).
But anyway it is still super great! I love Shinku~